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A CC BY Pepper and Carrot script by Juan José Segura. You can share it, modify it, re-blog, illustrate…

This is a script for the webcomic Pepper and Carrot. Comments are welcome. The story is the second part of “The golem“.

The Golem (Part 2 of 2)

First scene:

Panel #1: Komona, market day. Pepper is walking across the market, behind her walks the golem, carrying all the stuff that she is buying. Carrot is on the golem’s head having great fun. The Sun is starting to go down, but it is still bright day.

Pepper: What a wonderful idea to use the golem to carry all the buying!

Panel #2: The group passes in front of a villa. The villa looks luxurious. It has a big garden at the front of the big house. The garden has a fountain and a pond. The fountain is a stone made woman carrying an amphora. The water flows out of the amphora and falls nicely into the pond. While the group is walking in front of this villa, the golem is the only one looking at it.

Panel #3: Close up of the golem’s face. He is staring very intensively at something.

Panel #4: Close up of the stone made woman. She looks beautiful. Ancient greek style.

Panel #5: We see Pepper but the golem is not in the frame. Pepper is frozen in the middle of walking because a “CRASH” sounds just behind her. Carrot is jumping into the frame from outside, he looks scared (he is jumping out of the golem’s head, although we do not see the golem).

Panel #6: View of the group in front of the villa. Pepper observes the golem. It has let all the stuff fall on the ground and keeps looking towards the statue. A little heart pops out of his head.

Pepper: Mmmm… Do you like her?

Panel #7: Close up of Pepper.

Pepper: OK! I will turn her into a golem so you can spend the day with her while helping me carrying my stuff, then we will return her into the garden!

Second scene:

Panel #8: Top view of of the garden. We see the statue and Pepper. Pepper has drawn some signs on the ground, surrounding the statue. The signs are glowing.

Pepper: Ok, this should do the work done.

Panel #9, 10 & 11:  Close up of the statue. In panel 9 it is as always shown. In panel 10 she starts moving her arms and feet. In panel 11 she walks out of the pedestal, the amphora is crashing on the ground and a water jet is getting out of the ground from a broken pipe.

Panel #12: Pepper is walking out of the vila with the stone woman, they walk towards the golem, who has now a bigger heart popping out of its head. At the back  of the scene we see the villa’s door now open and a very angry man is walking out. He is fat and wears fancy clothing.

Panel #13: Pepper is talking to the two golems, a bit screaming bubble is also on the scene.

Pepper: Ok, lets continue the shopping day, and you can be together, but before it turns dark she must return to…

Scream bubble: STOP! THIEVES!

Panel #14: Close up of the angry rich man and Pepper. The rich man is shouting, Pepper looks shocked and scared.

Rich Man: This statue is mine! You cannot take it from my garden! Guards! Guards! Thief! My statue!

Pepper: Glup! No.. This is a missunde….

Third scene:

Panel #15: Top view of the streets of Komona. All the characters are running down the street. Pepper goes at the head, with Carrot closely following her, then go the two Golems running holding hands. After them a bunch of guards with helmets and spears and finally the rich fat man. All the stuff that Pepper bought during the day is now on the ground in front of the villa.

Panel #16: Top view. The group and its persecutors are leaving the walls of Komona and approaching the pit of the main entrance of he city. Their shadows are elongated because the Sun is very close to set down.

Panel #17: Front view of the group, they are now at the border of the fall. Their back is turned to the fall and they are facing their persecutors (we do not see the persecutors). The two golems are holding hands.

Panel #18: Close up of the rich man. He is angry and pointing to the front. Some guards are running, passing him by.

Rich man: Get them!

Panel #19: The guards are flying into the air after being beaten. The golem has both fists going on a movement from down the ground to up the sky. Sun keeps going down. Red colours in the sky.

Pepper: Beware! For he is fearless, and therefore powerful!(*)

(*) Wink to Frankenstein.

Panel #20: Close up of Pepper

Pepper: The Sun is setting down, the golems will be motionless again in few seconds!

Panel #21: The golems are holding hands and looking at each other. Sky is dark red behind them. The last Sun beams hitting their faces.

Panel #22: Close up of the rich man face. He is suddenly realizing that they were not stealing from him. He is understanding now what is going on.

Panel #23: The golems’ faces are all covered by shadows. Not alive anymore. Sky is dark violet. First stars appearing.

Panel #24: Close up of the rich man. He has an understanding-sad smile.

Panel #25: The Vila’s garden. We see the pond and the fountain. The fountain is now formed by the golem and the statue hoding hands and looking at each other. The water comes out of the amphora, that is lying on the ground.

Panel #26: It is night. Close up of Pepper. She is crying on the ground, she is holding her broom and is surrounded by all the stuff that she bought during the day.

Pepper: How I am supposed to carry all this back home?!

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